I'm Not A Writer

I'm not a writer 

I'm not a writer as you know

But my pen only dance for you.

I;m not a poet as you see

But the rhyme for you comes from the sea . (deep place meant by it )

I mayn't gain you by some words

But you were my only choice 

You are a tree and others are levies

You stay and they will one day leave .

You are the sea in earth and the life 

With you people knew whats laugh

With you smiles have painted the skies

And the universe get jealous from earths life .

I'm not a writer as you know

But I try my best to impress you 

And my love to you will always stay

Not only in words but also in my life's way ..

Author's Note

For Someone So Special To Me <3 <3
Vivo per te
Thanks For your reviews :)

Reviews

[luna11]

Lovely:) "You are the sea in earth and the life" Very sweet.

[Dhaye]

Anything will be done by a person who's in love.
Good work!

[stars are far]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the way you led the reader into thoughts and questions. We need to write for someone. I write for people lost and missed in a life. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[stars are far]

thank you so much for your review ..
And I personally write for people who cross my mind and heart often.. people i care about truely... thank you again .. :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

many of us are not really a writer....pen is more stronger then a sword.....

''You are the sea in earth and the life
With you people knew whats laugh
With you smiles have painted the skies
And the universe get jealous from earths life''

would be fav line of mine......

[Devanshu Rajput]

great write keep writing........

[stars are far]

thank you so much ...
and yes its true .. you write what you feel..and feelings are always stronger than museles >.
thank you for your reivew :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

welcome

[Nightfall]

I've never seen such a great piece.

[stars are far]

aww thank you :)

[Acer]

You are the sea in earth and the life
With you people knew whats laugh
With you smiles have painted the skies
And the universe get jealous from earths life .....

i loved this above lined indeed. You're growing i'd say. It's an another great poem from my point of view i'd say. Really, beautiful write. Loved your words too.

[stars are far]

thank you :)))
thats so sweet from you :)

[Acer]

My pleasure :-''). your writing showed depth indeed.

[stars are far]

when love from heart you write from heart :')

[Acer]

Yeah, that's true. I 101 % agree with you, i believe "if you think from your heart, you can'e ever misleads..." this statement i'd read out from any person's way, yet i'm not getting who was he, but i think i read this from the site.

[stars are far]

I do like it.and thanks for the backup :)

[Acer]

My pleasure :*-'')

[Pax]

how sweet and romantic poem my friend... lovely infact...
simple words are the most heartfelt write...
Great!

[Cassie Fraga]

and a lucky person indeed!!
writing is a great way to express and you did it in simple poetic style!! AWESOME!!

[Joan*Eckhart]

Despite the few errors, it was a lovely read. "You are the sea in earth and the life." I really love this line.

[Undying Glory]

good write here, and you are a writer haha, i can vouch for that. this was pretty interesting and i like the rhythm of this one. good work!