I thought It Will Be Different

(12-1-2013)

We type those love letters

And get stuck in the “send” button

We look at each other’s pictures

And with our thoughts we cry so hard…

 

After you are gone, my life didn’t change

I thought I will be worse than I used to be

But it seemed to be another picture

That is drawn but our destiny not as one but two..

 

I thought I will cry over you,

But I remembered that I used to cry from you .

I thought I will press “send” to any love letter

But still you won’t reply…

 

I thought I will be different

But sadly it’s not…maybe I t will be through days

My tears will no more fall

And my heart will no more draw your picture

 

Thanks for teaching me

That life isn’t a pinky dream

It is monsters fighting over a bone

And one day this bone will be your own  heart

Author's Note

hope you like :))
1:50 Pm :P no second was took :P

Reviews

[Acer]

New flash. I liked, coloring are good, package is so bright, loved it overall.

[stars are far]

thanks for your time :)

[Acer]

My pleasure, but i really loved your work. I think i utilized my time here.

[stars are far]

:)) its my pleasure

[Acer]

;-')

[Acer]

;-')

[Suzy Q]

I feel like the tense should be different as far as writing "will" and "would," but other than that, I really enjoyed it.

[under-the-water]

this is one of those simple poems that ignite spinning memories into my head immidialty. completely relatable. i can still feel it.
very good.

[Black]

a very emotional poem,
very pretty

[Joan*Eckhart]

Well written, emotional and relatable.

[Tai Ryens]

I love your beginning. 'Twas enticing, and drew me oh so closely into the poem.

[khalid]

very nicely penned. i can feel the emotions behind this poem. it shows big deal of frustration and disappointment specially from the beloved person. and yes life has become such a forest with lack of feelings..

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Awesome poem....
realisation makes us feel elated and high...
we can only learn from life then move on...

great stuff :)