Our Breakup

(5-1-2013)

Our Breakup 

It's only been few week we are one

But your caring part was gone 

Your sweetness went in a second

With no remembering who am I !

Sorry but that's me , that's me

If you love me ,you are welcomed 

If not, you are welcomed to the exit door

That's me ..that's me

I won't change for some dude

That one time acted rude

I want to always be myself

because my face is much nicer than a mask.

it's not my fault for being myself

But my dignity is above the sky you live under

So Good Bye..and be sure 

I'm not waiting for someone like you....

Author's Note

Hope you like it ..

Reviews

[khalid]

love means respect. if we love somebody, we respect them and we wait to get back not only love but also mutual respect. if we dont feel any of the two twards those people or if we dont feel love and respect from them, we better get apart before any of the two goes deeper in the relation and then the pain will be too deadly hurting..
very nice point of view expressed in a very sweet way

[under-the-water]

you seem very nice. because you expressed an angry topic and sugar coated it magnificently.

[Undying Glory]

this was a pretty sad write, good job at conveying those emotions. sure hope you'll feel better soon.
"it's not my fault for being myself
But my dignity is above the sky you live under
So Good Bye..and be sure
I'm not waiting for someone like you....
that was a powerful stanza. although i was wondering, did you intend it not to rhyme?
anyway good job here

[stars are far]

thanks for you review.and those feelings couldnt come out rhyming..i thought if i rhymed them they will lose the meaning and that anger that was hidden in my heart..

[Lily Mae]

If you honor yourself and stay within your own beautiful power you will attract that same love back to you.. Well written..xo

[stars are far]

thank you ... i do what my mind says not what my heart...because our hearts will betray us :)
thanks for your review :)

[Joan*Eckhart]

Very honest poem.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Breakups are so sad...but you shown courage here...
and you shoud hope for the best...nothing less...

a great poem :)

[Tai Ryens]

A wise outlook on relationships, indeed. I most certainly admire your strength to resist the urge for love, for I cannot resist such a beautiful yet devastating thing.