My Place !

My Place !

A Poem by stars are far

I might not be one of you guys

But I wear no disguise

That’s me and I’m not afraid to be

Someone different or not honoring thee..

 

I might be sitting in a wrong place

But I’m someone you’d like to face

I will not hurt you if you didn't

I will love you as you love me .

 

I might not be an awesome someone

But when you need anyone I will be that one

When you are about to fall

I will hold your and take you out of any hole.

 

I might be in a wrong place

But I will never  take your space .

© 2012 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
please can you suggest better titles !
i will be thankful

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Another great poem, so feelings are there that i've ever seen...well written. I read out your author's note, about changing your tittle, in a view of my point, i think your tittle should b ...

1-your space
2-That one
3-Someone
4-My place & your space
5-No disguise
6-Not afraid to be
7-wrong-place

from these above seven tittle's, you can choose anyone, if i've an option to choose then i'd like to go for "Wrong-place"...anyway, now it's depends on you what you'd decide, i loved your writing indeed. you've some feelings about someone i can say by your writing...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great piece. Very focused and defiant.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not Afraid to Be Me? Welll done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tyre, Lebanon



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