Last Bless

Are you the last bless in this year ?

Or an angel that God sent ..

 

I know I’m born to hurt

But I don’t know why

You are so sweet , you are

More than any dream I can have .

Or any beauty I can think about

Everything you say …

Everything you do, is more than I deserve..

 

I’m sorry for making you feel bad

But trust me , you deserve not me

More than me ,.

You deserve the moon or the sun

Not a simple star hanging there is the sky

You are that person that I will never forget

Buddy , hope you the best life ever…

And a year full of happiness

And for you I will be everything

Your friend, your sister, your mother

Your teacher, and your girlfriend if you need..

 

I love you my amazing friend <3

Author's Note

For someone so special ...
not a boyfriend yet he is more than that ...
I will always be beside you <3

Reviews

[Black]

a wonderfull poem Suhad!!

[Yina]

I know this feeeling:) I love how you made each line a different color, makes it so vibrant:) Beautiful:)

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

I always love your editing to your work. Its so sweet. I think it helps emphasise your lines.. or maybe I'm reading too much into it.
but its obvious you care about this person very much. "You deserve the moon or the sun/Not a simple star hanging there in the sky." These are perhaps my favorite lines. Fantastic job. Keep on writing. :)

[stars are far]

thanks gor reading this ...
merry christmas

[Snow Curls = ]]

awww It's so detailed and cute :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A great poem, full of vigour...
well done :)

[Tai Ryens]

I absolutely ADORE the second stanza! Brilliant, and so emotionally packed from start to finish. Well done, I daresay! Well done!