The Last Thunder

It’s just another title in this life

Where he and she draw the stars

Building their dreams above the clouds

And looking at their sun with no fear .

 

She was young with her thoughts

And he gave her his soul

And promised to never leave her

In ups and downs ,sadness and happiness.

 

One late night, he held her hand

Walked under the rain

Under the sea and above the clouds

Holding each other so tight.

 

With a sudden thunder that broke their rhyme

And stole her from between his eyes

Taking her to under their first date

And killing his sense with no knife .

 

He grab a pen with no ink

And itched at her tomb with his tears

And with the fear that he was afraid from

With broken bones he wrote :

“ our promises will always be alive

I will see you soon in the second life

We will sleep side by side

And with the non-ever we will be aside “

Author's Note

Just another thought....
Hoe you like it :)

Reviews

[Acer]

stunning thunder.

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stunning unexpected review .. :D

[Acer]

You deserved indeed.

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thank you :)

[Acer]

My pleasure ;-')

[Acer]

My pleasure ;-')

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:))

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[Undying Glory]

This was quite intriguing, I really like the sound of this poem. This seemed powerful and the last stanza was quite deep. Great job!

[Joan*Eckhart]

Wow, I'm really enjoying going through your stuff. You definitely have a way with words.

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thank you

[Yina]

Sooo interesting! It's sad yet the ending has hope, great:)

[Pax]

oh i love the last stanza for it speaks of forever love...
great work!

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tahnk you

[Cerise]

very well tried....good work..:)

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thank you

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very nice piece of inking...
well done :)

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thank you bro,...
btw i need you

[Tai Ryens]

I see that you're improving constantly, it releases itself through this poem.

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thank you

[khalid]

very nicely penned. enjoying to read..

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thank you