In One Day

In One Day

I can see it from your eyes

That beauty that never dies

Me and you are lovers

But with broken hearts we'll live...

We draw the dreams of rosebuds

But you took a flower that's not yours

You killed a rosebud at its noon

And left your heart at the moon...

We cought the drop of love

Kissed them between our papers

Hugged each other so tight

And we forever for cried for a second..

Author's Note

To a special someone ...
Hope you like

Reviews

[Joan*Eckhart]

I love it. The words conjure up such a pretty image to the reader.

[Pax]

very sweet my friend...
heartfelt infact...
enjoyed it!

[Ravyne Hawke]

beautifully written.. love the imagery.

[khalid]

very sweet, very nicely penned. alot of feelings of love and passion although it has a big deal of frustration..

[Tai Ryens]

Touching and heartfelt. Well done.

[Sid]

Heartfelt poem, honest and touching, I didn't really like this line
And left your heart at the moon
somehow feels forced there, but the rest of the poem is very well written and the love nicely conveyed...good write!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This is a very sweet, heartfelt and romantic poem...
written by special writer :)