That Un forgettable Night

 I know it’s true, and everyone says that

We will never be together because we are not meant to be

Our names weren’t born beside each other

But our hearts flied from one heaven into another..

I  used to be with you at those cold freezy nights

With that hug that made everything so warm

 The breeze sounds like a music

And your words were my lullaby

I was falling so deep in your arms

Feeling your warmth and enjoying your heartbeats..

 

But now after I know that me and you

Will never be one soul , we will always stay two..

We will always remember that night

We will always feel the warmth at the breezes sound

Because it will always always reminds me of you ..

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Author's Note

Just imagination ..
hope you like :)

Reviews

[khalid]

i really liked it..but nobody knows where the good would be. nobody can decide if two are not supposed to be for each other. if there is real love from both sides, it will survive whatever others say..but if one works for it to survive while the other doesnt, this gives people a logic reason to say that it cant work..

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

The last stanza is wonderful, it wraps up the whole poem nicely. How beautiful. This described with simplicity the feelings of love. I love that this wasn't messy.

[luviva]

just great!!.. the emotion is too high i really felt for you

[M.Babu]

Ah the singe, that an encounter with deep love leaves eh?

It's well written and emotive. I like it...

Nice write Suhad.

~M.Babu~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This possesses a wonderful melodic beat to it...
and super imagination that mirrors reality to the reader....
stunning xD

[Black]

a lovely poem
nicely done :)

[Sid]

Imagination, that's kind of hard to believe. Your words paint a picture of one who's been there and it's lovely and now I'm left to admire your imaginative mind. A great heartfelt poem, beautiful in it's descriptive brilliance...great work!!