Someone out there really loves you

Someone out there really loves you

 

Stop prisoning yourself inside those thoughts

Stop keeping yourself between walls

Wake up, wake up

Look around you … for a second

Just forget the way you live

Please man , stop being like that …

Take a look on the real life

Go out there .. look

Don’t search , don’t stare

Someone will come to you

Hold your hands

And say everything will be okay

That one person

Will love you forever

And that person for you my love

Is Me

Author's Note

For the ones i love ... my best friends <3

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

How sweet! This is a nice little piece and I love the formatting and the coloring. Nice job.

[Yina]

I can tell you really care about your friends:) there's definite feeling in this poem:)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

What a stunning; loving ending you scribe here...
and nice heartfelt thoughts and wisdom portrayed...
friends lucky to have you...
amazing :D

[khalid]

very nice to feel others because its the way to be felt..
i really like how it was written

[M.Babu]

This is so beautiful!! I'm favoriting this...it really touches me. Gives the reader a wish that there is someone like the persona out there watching over them and who loves them regardless of their self demarcation and doubt etc...
"I applaud you"!!

~M.Babu~

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thank you :)

[Desmund Tiny]

oh you are such a caring and loving person.......
This poem reminds me of my fav. quotation

" Humans always look too deep into the answers before them, and lost sight of them."


^w^ Great write......

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thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are an inspired and inspiring person.

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thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Ravyne Hawke]

I really love how positive this poem is.. how encouraging and welcoming. It reminds us to put ourselves out there, for that chance meeting of someone special. There is a contest going for encouraging poetry; if you have not already, you may want to submit this one for it. Anyway, I am honoured to have read this. What a rare gem!

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thank you ..
and i will submit to the contest :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I wish you luck!

[Ravyne Hawke]

The particular contest that I was thinking of must have ended already, or been removed.. dang it! Yours would have been so perfect! I know I still saw it listed Saturday... oh well. I hope you will continue to look through the contests and enter your work. You have talent!

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thank you so much .. and maybe i will enter other contest :)

[Craba]

Such a wonderful read, creative as well

[Pax]

sweet!!!!!!
~i can say your a very caring and loving one...
"go out there .. look
Don’t search , don’t stare"
~true, one thing to find someone is understand the poeple around you, and you'll see the one is hiding... I'm sure acceptance will come along the way... :)

nice write...

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thank you so much ... :)