Don't Fall

You are the cloud

Thant rains for me  and gives..

You never said :”that’s enough “

You never broke down …

But now ??

Why now ?

You were so strong

With your heart and thoughts

And that smile

That never left your face…

Don’t frown ! don’t fall down ..

You are the only one

That turn my tears into smiles

And my sad times into happiness..

You are that tree

In  my wonder land

That protects me from day light

And give me the night breezes

You are so special to me

So man .. don’t fall ..

Friend.. keep your smile on

And hold on..

Because without ups and downs

Life have no taste ..

Stay strong ..

Because without you

I have no strength to stand up…

Author's Note

Hope you feel better soon .. my friend

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

"Because without ups and downs, Life have no taste"
Very true lines, in that what makes us who we are, are our unique experiences, good or bad...

and wow what a sincere and heartfelt poem, truly deep and touching to the heart :)
I spoken to your friend :p and he says he loves this poem so much and your caring nature that is so endearing and sublime :)

Awesome work :D

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Thank you :)

[Sid]

Great uplifting poem, this is really encouraging.
"Because without ups and downs
Life have no taste .."
great words of wisdom these. A beautiful, heartfelt poem...great work!!

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thank you

[Pax]

what a colorful write!!!!
full of possitive vibes!!!!
friendship and all its bonds of love...

Great write!!!

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

I love the formatting, the colors, the pattern of it all. But when you say "Because without ups and downs, life have no taste," gramatically, it should be "has."
Other than that, wonderful :)

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thank you so much :)

[Sweets]

Awesome dedication!!!!!!!! :)))))))

[Poppie Mira]

Indeed!

[Tai Ryens]

Finding the beauty in devastation is what I believe to be true nirvana. Lovely poem.

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Thank you :)