goodbye, goodbye

goodbye, goodbye

A Poem by Hermione

then one day
goodbye, goodbye,
past, my way
goodbye, goodbye
of my life.
goodbye, goodbye
just everything
alright
goodbye, goodbye
and go far, far far
don't stop
but i must not
think such bad thoughts.

© 2009 Hermione


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You didn't ask for an interpretation, but I can't help it, because this is just the kind of poem that just screams for it.

I think this is about a person who's about to commit suicide for some reason, and her (let's say it's a her) mind's 99% made up, but perhaps she has someone she really cares about who needs her, and she can't quite bare to leave that person behind, hence the last line.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great Poem =] I can relate to this poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i can relate to this. i loved this poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


You didn't ask for an interpretation, but I can't help it, because this is just the kind of poem that just screams for it.

I think this is about a person who's about to commit suicide for some reason, and her (let's say it's a her) mind's 99% made up, but perhaps she has someone she really cares about who needs her, and she can't quite bare to leave that person behind, hence the last line.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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