Good or Evil

I believe That in each and every one of us lays good or evil

The side that person chooses

Defines who the person becomes defined as!

Reviews

[Tamlin]

This is a really great concept which is very hard to state at all, let alone in so few words. :) I love the way you put it into this form. You might look at using a synonym for 'define' in the last line, as it is a little repetitive. Well done. :)

[Xena the soon to be 9th grader]

Thank you for your review. But the repetitiveness is done on purpose! You see I was trying to exaggerate on the definition of what defined was..I wanted to give emphasis on the world without using too many words and that is why I chose to say it twice. What better way to empathize something than say it twice! Thanks!

[dicey jones]

Really beautiful...you said in brief what most people would say with a thousand words

[Xena the soon to be 9th grader]

Thank you...you have demolished that thoughts as well through your comment!

[ENJOY A CUP OF COFFEE]

Short, simple, but great! I enjoy reading your poems.

[Xena the soon to be 9th grader]

Thank you so much.

[ENJOY A CUP OF COFFEE]

You are very Welcome