I hate You

I hate You

A Poem by Xena the soon to be 9th grader

Your like a pesticide.
Gnawing away at my very insides.
I hate you so much you make me want to scream
Is it wrong to wish the death upon someone who brought me to this world
If so god please forgive me, for i've sinned.

But this hate that I have still persues.
Not giving any ease
Why do you make me hate thou so
Even though thou should be a thee
Since thou gave me life and thou is no stranger
I have no fondess for thou so thou remains a thou and not a thee

You treat me as you wish thinking that I'm but 
your mere pet
Well if so you have kept me very unkept
When I break down and let you see me cry
You try to friend me up as if I'm some child.
Young I may be but I am no headless fowl

I'm smart enough to know...
 the difference between
Good and Evil
So know may you be gone for I am not common people

© 2013 Xena the soon to be 9th grader


Author's Note

Xena the soon to be 9th grader
Thee: a way to refer someone who you are friends or partner with or someone that you at least know. Someone who you have fondness/love for.
Thou: A stranger or someone you have no fondness for.

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Really deep emotions in this piece. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are realy smart to refer to shakesperean terms in your poem. I love the way you incorporated thee and thou into the way you adress someone who you should love but do not love. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Xena the soon to be 9th grader
Xena the soon to be 9th grader

Baltimore, MD



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Hi my name is Xena. I just graduated the 8th grade and I am definitely looking forward to highschool. Just like one of the writers on here said, you should take that magic carpet and let it lead you t.. more..

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