I'm by no means suggesting any changes at all. Leave it the way it is. But this is the way I hear what you're saying in a different way. Your point is quite clear. I agree with Chris below. :)
The dream felt like an apocalypse;
everything turning into nothing.
"Must we all suffer," they said
No, I don't want to suffer, I said,
but we're all humans,
isn't that what we're meant for?
100/100
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
I'm very late in my reply, but thank you so much for your interpretation!
I'm by no means suggesting any changes at all. Leave it the way it is. But this is the way I hear what you're saying in a different way. Your point is quite clear. I agree with Chris below. :)
The dream felt like an apocalypse;
everything turning into nothing.
"Must we all suffer," they said
No, I don't want to suffer, I said,
but we're all humans,
isn't that what we're meant for?
100/100
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
I'm very late in my reply, but thank you so much for your interpretation!
I love writing (as everyone here does) but I want to be a math teacher... if that doesn't describe my life then I don't know how else to put it. more..