Awakening

Awakening

A Poem by sudeepsd
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just an awakening

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When you see yourself in the murkiness
You know you are bad and amiss
When you are in this state
You feel, as if, gloom as given you a kiss


You plunge in your own eyes
And feel your own cries
And then you don’t know what to do
But wait for your sun to rise

You are full of guilt
and ready, any moment, to wilt
And then you can do just one thing
Lay down on the serene cool silt

When you finish your lament
Shall come your sun rise
And then you’ll be reborn
An ounce more wise

© 2011 sudeepsd


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Added on February 14, 2011
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Guildford, Europe, United Kingdom



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