A poetic evening

A poetic evening

A Poem by suchitra sarmah
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An imaginary evening with a lover who doesnot exist(imaginary)

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And you asked my favourite colour
But the conditions applied
I cant use the name of the colour
I replied the forehead of an indian woman
You smiled,I had seen through the future
A poetic evening with you
may be you didnot exist at all
creating you imperfect in your perfection I laughed
may be you were just vacuum


you asked my aim
I told you to live in a hut with no money
But with a life money cant buy
and you looked deep into my eyes
You asked whats the thing that makes me happy most
I told you the way books engulf me
and I lost myself into books
you were a little afraid
Books may drifted me away from you
yes may be you dont exist
But does that really matter
not at all I think
And even if I love you, you have nothing to do with it

© 2014 suchitra sarmah


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thank you for your review but i think you need to study more poems so that you can know words are not everything for a poem,study some indian poems

Posted 9 Years Ago


It feels like you are missing a lot of words.... It has potential, but o is choppy and the message is all over the place

Posted 9 Years Ago



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suchitra sarmah
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Biswanath Chariali, Assam, India



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