Touch

Whispering fingers
on skin
as the nerves
reach up 
to be electrified
by soft slight fingers,

feeling lingers
in those places,

tiny impulses,
nails like
ghosts of ice dancers
on the surface
sliding up legs
then ribcage
over shoulders
to excite the back
then bums of each other,
reciprocating affection,

two touching
lovers;

Sensation
Traced through skin…

a flowing river.

Reviews

[Elaine Christie]

This has the potential of being a serious love poem, 'then bums of each other' had me giggling, really liked it!

[James Walpole]

Lol I got told that using bums took the mood away on the 52 page! I like bums though :p

[Ana B.]

Love it, the sensual note here is really teasing, and exciting. Nice write!

[James Walpole]

Thanks alot :)