Orgasm

Detail meaning of the word (hopefully you can relate)

That love chemical your brain ejeculates on your heart to make it beat faster and wake up the butterflies on your rib cages down to your tangled and twisted intestines. Your stomach releasing the juices that makes food deteriorate instantly as if you haven't ate in months. Your liver burning as if you a chain smoker as you lose your breath being speechless and swallowing your tongue. The kiss that makes you regurgitate your endormophines, with that being said realizing what they mean by "speak your heart out". -suave

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I was just thinking more of a reactional pressure thing such as takes place in a geyser on a whole different level.
Now, my idea sounds kind of lame.

[Willard Wells]

Love the work and some imagery is more than I feel, but everyone's ride is different to a degree. I can see this in a different format, but that's just me. It's your piece and very nice. Thanks for sharing.

[SuaveS]

Thanks for reviewing...might aswell throw some recommendation if its no prblm?

[Willard Wells]

OK, this is what I was thinking.

That love chemical your brain
Ejaculates on your heart
Make it beat faster

You might find the flow works also removing some words. Just and idea on structure.

[SuaveS]

Interesting well noted