Hungry Lenses

Hungry Lenses

A Poem by Tony
"

an observation.

"

The camera man,

Who films the starving child,

Could give him some food.

© 2011 Tony


Author's Note

Tony
Is this a haiku?

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Its almost a haiku..one more syllable on the second line needed.
Haikus are usually about nature though I think.
But I agree with what you said.

Posted 11 Years Ago


We have lost our compassion...traded it in for entertainment...Peace, Love, and Light

Posted 11 Years Ago


So true, we could stop watching and start doing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Meaningful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's probably a haiku in intent, and imagery but not in form, traditionally haikus have a syllable structure of 3/5/3 or 5/7/5

Pretty good though :)

Thanks for sharing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Brilliant!
And all is asked and answered...full circle and powerfully so! Yes, he could but then again....this is thought provoking....can people intervene when they are merely observing....I would but I know that is not all.....enough to say...stirred the senses lovely! lol
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 27, 2011
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Tony
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I am a guy, 49. I am spirit residing in a carbon based life form. The god I know can be found in motion and rest. I live in Mexico because it's very free, and community still means something. .. more..

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