Starry Eyed Girl

Starry Eyed Girl

A Poem by onlytemporary

Starry eyed girl with a mouth that drips hope. Candy coated poison slipping past my lips. Destroying me from the inside like a double-sided blade making its journey through my body. I have followed you for so long, arms stretched out to you, always here to be your warm embrace after the world leaves you cold.

© 2016 onlytemporary


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onlytemporary
ignore grammar problems, i just write without really thinking about correct punctuation and what not.

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Its a good read, maybe not enough rhyme for my taste but its very deep! i will not hold it against you, there is somthing small missing i cant place it 99 percent is what i rate it

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 24, 2016
Last Updated on October 24, 2016
Tags: romance, spoken word, love

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i will give until im empty and then some more..

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