widow

sad

i was looking in the mirror

and i saw your pretty face

with all of that love and grace

when i see that face all i could do is cry with grimace

my one true love my one

taken from my life by deaths vice

but we will be together soon 

on this second moon

i love u

 

Reviews

[Tyler and Lozza]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm -_-

[mortyJr]

i agree with the other guy it is verry song like. was that the aim of thius peice because its verry good.

[Miles Evens]

This is a wonderful piece of writing , you can feel the sadness and you did a great job on conveying that

[mortyhound]

this is an amazing piece it sounds like a song