The Pleasure Box

A friend asked me to write this, so write it I did. Ahem.

Hidden from view,

A little box of secrets

Lies in wait for your

Impending lustful need.

Octagonal tower

Hiding away an arsenal

Engineered specifically

To send you moaning, screaming.

So innocent,

Adorned with flowers,

None would think

A second thought.

But once that aching

Dripping need

Comes creeping on

So wrathfully,

The top comes off

To reveal these things

Meant to drive you

To your edge.

But how to start

This blissful pleasure?

So many choices,

So many toys.

Deep rubber stimulators,

Perfectly shaped glass,

Plastic in tune with your

Body's vibrations,

And every piece

Will be sure

To slake your desire

In the end.

Reviews

[Holly]

Oh, mmm, wow. I like this, it kind of seems like deja vu! xP Can someone please tell me how to put the checky thingy on top of the e and a?! I very much like this though, it's not degrading like some erotic writes are, and it's also very classy but erotic. Going into my favorite. :)

[John Stussy]

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed this and honored that it's going into your favorites. :)

[That_Girl]

"Plastic in tune with your
Body's vibrations" LOVE that.

Sexy! Lustful lines that pull the reader in deeper and deeper as they read. ;) Nice!

[John Stussy]

Glad you liked that one, it was pretty fun to write haha.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

You cant beat a little box of secrets.
Great work this.

[The Random Writings Of ..]

My oh my - as my face turns red :) I love the little box of secrets that lies in wait for your impending lustful needs... haha - do I dare say that many of us have these :) if not you should get one ((blush)) Wow John, something different than what I have read from you in a while. Very lusty and erotic! I like! It is very playful, and yes I agree with Charlie, not nasty as all. Great job!

[John Stussy]

Thank you Kate! It was a fun write, and a bit outside of the box from my usual dark and gloom. Mayhaps I'll try my hand at some more of these types of pieces. :)

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

You are most welcome! Stepping outside of your box is never a bad thing!

[Destinyxi]

So many toys.
Deep rubber stimulators,
Perfectly shaped glass,
Plastic in tune with your
Body's vibrations,

YUUUUUMMMMYYYY did it just get hot in here or what? Damn Johnny boy, this is a freaking good piece!

[John Stussy]

Heh, thank you kindly, that means a lot coming from someone who writes as good erotica as you!

[Destinyxi]

Hey you're not bad at it at all! This poem was steamy :P

[Leah]

Yes.... YES. I'm sorry, what? OH.

Well, I guess that is my review for this.... *starts drooling*.

Go figure.

[Charlie]

Well then, how delicious.
"Deep rubber stimulators,

Perfectly shaped glass,

Plastic in tune with your

Body's vibrations..."

That gave me a very particular image (though the beginning of the poem did just fine, thank you). It may possibly be because I love women and those things are so very closely related to sexual intercourse between two women (not necessarily in essence), but maybe not (shrugs).

So, my question is that, being that you are a man (or so I've assumed, if wrongfully, forgive me), where do these toys come into play for you? Is this a representation of something you would do or have actually done? Or maybe, is this a representation of how the friend that asked of you this poem feels?
I don't know--I'm inquisitive, thus I just wonder these things.

But reading this poem, I felt you had more experience in this yourself rather than have just heard about it, or seen it.

I just had a bit of an epiphany--maybe this is something completely unrelated to your desires. And maybe that wasn't really much of an epiphany at all, but I'm sure you get my drift.

My apologies for the lengthy review. All in all, I enjoyed your poem. It gave me a good, familiar sense of erotica without so much of the "freaky, nasty" quality, if you understand what I mean.
Blessings.