Sipping on Smoke

Sipping on Smoke

A Chapter by John Stussy

He's sipping on smoke,
Sampling the bitter
And savoring the bold.
Burning toxins flow
Aiming to distract,
To ease mental chaos.
Dependence ensues,
Pathetic weakness of his.
Silver ghosts escape his lips
And flee into the night.


© 2012 John Stussy


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Silver ghosts escape his lips
And flee into the night.

wow that ending is brilliant... a very introspective look at smoking and what it means to those who do it.

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John Stussy
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Cook, writer, reader, musician. I don't bte, unless asked to or bitten first. My site's link is to some recordings of my poetry, and I might add some recordings of me playing my sax onto there too... more..

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