Filthy Human

Someone needs to say it.

Get a grasp on the power within

Bring to the forefront your violence.

What's the way you lust for blood?

How many kills means enough is enough?

Make the list of demons higher and higher

Until it catches fire from Heaven's wrath.

Manmade destruction feels better than any

That can come from righteous cleansing.

A third of the angels fell down into sin

But they're no match for the human race.

When you glare into our deepest thoughts

Can you be proud of what you are?

So easy to slip into the darkness and call it light,

A simple matter to let some blood loose

While grinning ear to ear and say it's all good.

Oh don't get this all wrong bub,

Hurting others just isn't enough is it?

Take hit after hit, shot after shot,

Mix the two and down them with a smile.

How does that needle feel stuck deep in flesh?

Do you feel big and bad, light and glad?

Take it all in and breathe pure adrenalin.

Or peraps not that but methamphetamine.

Does it end yet? Haven't you died?

Guess you're still a trashed up piece of s**t,

Too careless to see your path of ashes,

Too cowardly to pull the damn trigger on yourself.

Wanna prove otherwise filthy human?

Here's the gun, have your go.

Good f*****g riddance.

Author's Note

Be offended, something is way wrong if you're not.

Reviews

Way to sum up us human beings. ;)
"Make the list of demons higher and higher". My favorite line, it's basically saying that destruction is growing and growing. Never ceasing, never ending. We're on our way to our ruin.
I would have to disagree with the comment that the profanity "cheapens it a little". I honestly believe that it gives the writing all the more passion.

[unspokenguilt]

Ouch...I can't say that i'm offended while others thrive off of hatred of others and selfloathing I stick to getting through the day. Offend the humanity I couldn't careless for i'm just one human.
In other News,
GREAT WRITE!
:) ear

Wow... It was a very well writen poem I like they way you described us humans because that is actually true, We are just a bunch of violent creatures who call bad things good.

Good Job!

[Paladin4life]

The thought is interesting but I dont care for the profanity. To me I think it cheapens it a little. The beginning is really good and provides a very dark picture of humanity and yoelds much food for thought.

[Rebel_angel]

wow like you said offended! and yet i think it is true and brilliant!

[Nathan Noble]

.....well u said it. haha and awesome job dude! great piece.

[Babbette Francis]

Uh.......well........hmmm......lets see.... S**T DUDE!!!! Good Moses ....ah-ha there's the words I was looking for. Where did this come from?

But I see where you're coming from, and I like the passion and anger. I stands for a good cause- one I totally relate to. Damn good piece !!! Tough but good. wow!!

[Wunderlich]

This is a good poem. People are violent and disgusting. Nice job :D