Pounce
A Poem by
John Stussy
Pantheresque maybe?
Muscles taut as springs,
She flings herself upon her
Prey, 'tis their demise.
© 2008 John Stussy
Reviews
funny, reminds me of someone I know.
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Oh Panthers! I think they are such beautiful animals, ;-) - This was a well written haiku!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Oh Panthers! I think they are such beautiful animals, ;-) - This was a well written haiku!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Its cute, not much to it but it gives the idea out just fine ^^
The again it is a Haiku, Its awsome all the same ^^
Posted 16 Years Ago
Its cute, not much to it but it gives the idea out just fine ^^
The again it is a Haiku, Its awsome all the same ^^
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Always love panthers and just how cunning they can be... a very cool haiku
Posted 16 Years Ago
Always love panthers and just how cunning they can be... a very cool haiku
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
That picture goes perfectly with the ominous warning. Rain..
Posted 16 Years Ago
That picture goes perfectly with the ominous warning. Rain..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Haha...now I like this pice, very imaginative. A great Hiaku, wonderfully written. I have such trouble writting them....!!!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Haha...now I like this pice, very imaginative. A great Hiaku, wonderfully written. I have such trouble writting them....!!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wonderful written Haiku like this....Kim
Posted 16 Years Ago
Wonderful written Haiku like this....Kim
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hurrr Haiku, nice touch.
Deft, precise, adriot. Well placed paw swipe on this one.
Y'know for being of the lupine bent, you're pretty good at reading Pantheras kind.~P
Posted 16 Years Ago
Hurrr Haiku, nice touch.
Deft, precise, adriot. Well placed paw swipe on this one.
Y'know for being of the lupine bent, you're pretty good at reading Pantheras kind.~P
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Ooh, this is a wonderful haiku. Very nicely done, great job!!!
Heather
Posted 16 Years Ago
Ooh, this is a wonderful haiku. Very nicely done, great job!!!
Heather
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 10, 2008
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John Stussy AZ
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Cook, writer, reader, musician. I don't bte, unless asked to or bitten first.
My site's link is to some recordings of my poetry, and I might add some recordings of me playing my sax onto there too...
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