[untitled]

Just having a little fun hehe

 

“Dream sweet,” she’d said

As we said our goodnights

But I’m not sure if she knew

My dream was too far away,

And with my dream that distant

Sleep was meaningless to me.

So I laid there and pondered

All that is my vision.

 

My dream… she rests peacefully

While I reminisce on tonight,

The way it felt being so close,

Her eyes examining and capturing

Every fiber of my being.

I was, I must admit,

Satisfyingly lost with her

As the music swirled about our souls.

Reviews

[~amanda~]

whenever i sleep over at my boyfriends house i cannot sleep. at all. its like his house is cursed.

the line "so i lay there and pondered" is exactly what that experience is like. i just lay there not needing to dream about anything because i am content to just be with him...

you capture the complexities of this so simply and beautifully. great work!!!

[Rain]

Another excellent piece. I hope you get your band together,too. Rain..

[Rachel DeHart]

I really like this.. The idea of not being able to dream because you already had it is nice...

[FoolsGold23]

Truly, lovely sentiment, "Dream Sweet" interesting idea that, most peeps say 'sweet dreams'. I don't know, but something about the way you wrote "As the music swirled about our souls" reminds me of *Gasps* a dance, of some sort. Lovely, lovely work, indeed, truly like this!

[Lillian]

This is beautiful. I really can tell that this is a true feeling. You're really speaking from the heart. I love this!