haha, random is as random does, I find. Rhyming aside, I like the sing-song type feel of this one, it rolls around on the mental tongue, and though the questions are probing, don't leave one with a sour taste because of their introspection. Great work, I was snagged at the beginning, from then following the progress to self examination. How you transition with such ease is remarkable to me, but then your poetry always is, haha. Great work!!
I think its really cool, the rhyming makes for a great flow and the topic is done in a funny way though it talks of just how destructive love can be... you certainly have an awesome way with words.
haha, random is as random does, I find. Rhyming aside, I like the sing-song type feel of this one, it rolls around on the mental tongue, and though the questions are probing, don't leave one with a sour taste because of their introspection. Great work, I was snagged at the beginning, from then following the progress to self examination. How you transition with such ease is remarkable to me, but then your poetry always is, haha. Great work!!
Cook, writer, reader, musician. I don't bte, unless asked to or bitten first.
My site's link is to some recordings of my poetry, and I might add some recordings of me playing my sax onto there too... more..