Contemplator of a Rose

Written from a friend's picture on here, FoolsGold23. the inspiring image accompanies.

 

 

The half-closed eyelids

And the simple cotton clothes

Belie the magnificence

Of this darling young dame.

 

Her hidden brown eyes

Glint with true understanding

Of the surrounding world,

Nothing hides from her mind.

 

Softly, sweetly shall she murmur

Her thoughts aloud on full pink lips,

Contemplating a peach-colored rose

Which seems grey beside her visage.

 

I’ll stay here at a distance,

Admiring the sight in total awe

Whilst the beautiful poetess

Continues her peaceful contemplation.

Author's Note

Hope you all enjoy!

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Softly, sweetly shall she murmur

Her thoughts aloud on full pink lips,

Contemplating a peach-colored rose

Which seems grey beside her visage.


How poeticly beautiful and Romantic this piece truly is ~it just blows me away

it is so soft and sweet with lovely images~ Great Stuff john

THanks for sharing

Fran

[allwrite]

Absolutely beautiful!!

[Kaitlyn]

wow. amazing. I could see it all happening in my head!! The girl sounds beautiful =)

[C. Johnson]

The pure yet loud imagery of it all...
Stunning

[Dean]

Great piece. looks like someone has a crush...

[FoolsGold23]

Gracious, what cooks up in that mind of yours I'll never know.
Sufficient to say, this rendered me speechless, I was not expecting to see something like this, such beauty and homely splendour (I like the rose the best, it is so much more graceful than can be imagined!) Indeed, this was a beautiful suprise, and I am flattered, honored, the whole nine yards, this is just too special for my paltry words. Thank you, again.