Romance With an Essay of Sweet Death

Fell in love with an essay by FoolsGold23, and well, her essay fell for me as well. A collaboration between her and I of sorts.

Sweet, darling essay,

I regret the delaying

Of my return to you.

Your mother has kept me

From viewing your beauty,

She won’t let us take part

In our mental stimulation

On thoughts of sweet death.

 

Forget me not dear essay,

And hold your hand

From striking your mother,

She does mean well.

It’s not just that though

But I fear for your life

As she can rip you asunder;

You know how strong she is.

 

Keep living in beauty, my essay love.

I’ll not forget you

Nor your inspiring words,

The way you made me

Contemplate death

And open my eyes

To what I believe,

Keep my words for you.

 

After the death you speak

Snatches my final breath,

I’ll live on in your words

As a phantom, a wraith,

You’ll give my soul a home.

Author's Note

Said essay I shared the romance with is (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Kaeyra/308853/) here, and the essay's point of view is (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Kaeyra/308848/) here. Enjoy.

Reviews

[FoolsGold23]

haha, So THAT"S why you were haunting my page! Just kidding, she wouldn't stop about this "New, dark haired writer who read me!" yada yada, so Now I know, haha, serves me right. Well done Stussy, she thinks you're the bomb...(yes I read it to her, sheesh, haha) great read, slightly humorous from my point of view, but she's my bambina, gotta love her. awesome work!

[These Haunted Hallways]

Oh man, John, that was really beautiful!! Damn, ya gave me a tear in this one!! Extremely romantic! The words were flawless, and im outta breath lol. Wonderful, wonderful poem!!

B.A.

[Gorgeous]

awwwww I loved that poem john
romance is you thing too =]