Falling Suicide Haiku

Came to me in a second where I looked out the window and wondered what it would be like to take that leap...

 Wind caresses my

Face as I’m tumbling down.

My pain will end now.

Reviews

[~amanda~]

haikus can be so lame sometimes, only because there is not really room for a good story arc, but you didnt disappoint! i liked this one because of its clarity and images that it conjured up. i dont mind the morbidity (is that a word) its actually is a rather poetic way to die, as sick as that sounds. lol. anyway... great poem! really original and cool. keep writing these! i want to see what you can come up with.

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

This is so good!!
I can't believe how simple you kept it while still making a great piece!!
SWEET!

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

Oh my gosh. That was awesome. Ive never really been good at haiku's but you defintiely have a talent for it.

[Too Me]

I have read many haikus and this one is absolutely breathtaking! *Lana*

[FoolsGold23]

lovely work, tad morbid, but at least the haiku turned out well!! Bravo friend Stussy, enjoyed this one....Err, in a way, as much as you can enjoy something about suicide.....~P

[Laura E. Aranda]

Very sad! Wow, kinda makes me dizzy just reading it! lea

[These Haunted Hallways]

Ooo, kinda haunting in a way. Well, when ya lose the war, it's unimaginably hard for the individual. I've been there with breakdowns and all. Too many. But i try to keep fighting. That's all u can do, really. I know ya dont want to be 'ker-splatted' all over the sidewalk below right? hehe. I really like this one. Cool haiku!

B.A.

[ShAdOw]

Amazing poem! I loved it.

Sometimes its hard to
Understand why we want to
End it suddenly

:) haiku ftw

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

I agree with Tai, you keep away from that window. ;) I think this is a great description of what it would be like. Great write!!!

Heather

[Tai Chi Italy]

An interesting thought in haiku John, stay away from the window though won't you? heres mine

stepping over edge
Heart attack. Hit the deck splat
broken neck to twitch.

I saw it on an advert trying to stop drunken youth doing stupid stunts! what do ya think?

smiling at you

Tai