Dreaming

Courtney... :)

I've held you before,

Whispered your name

Against your silky soft skin

Before granting you a kiss.

 

We've lain together,

Entwined by our legs

Under the sky relaxing

Together as lovers true.

 

You've held me in grace,

My guardian angel

Who kept my wholly safe.

Graceful your every action.

 

We've become one

In a physical manifestation,

Man, woman, true love.

One made of two halves.

 

I've grown old with you,

My love and my light

In the world's shaded gray,

You are my everything.

 

The dreams I have had

Gave me a way to live this.

Will you take my hand,

And make our dreams reality with me?

Author's Note

It is what it is.

Reviews

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

You know,

You wrote this over a year ago, that so crazy to think about. I'd swear on my life you were just here yesterday, and I walked away crying like a dumb a*s because you were leaving. Its crazy, I look at all your new poetry now, and I'm happy for you and Allison because she makes you so blissfully happy and when I started digging in your writings ( after 14 pages) I stumbled on a glimmer of what you and I were. Now it sort of feels like a spot we both missed in the clean up..an alien to all the other gorgeous poems surrounding it. I cant help but feel responsible for this beautifully written but box of catastrophe being left in your pristine line of work that I'm sure many aspiring writers dig through for any spark inspiration. I believe these are the things that tug slightly at the strings of my heart when I step on to your page and realize that the left side of your page that I used to rule, has changed from lovey dovey courtney and silly little shorts about nothing and has evolved into small I love you's of allison and dark dreams of malice and death. Its a bittersweet taste for sure and I'm not sure why I even dig into our past since it can do nothing for us now. The only thing I am sure of is that you are a wonderful writer and no matter how your writing evolves it ALWAYS evolves into something more amazing than description can handle.

--Courtney

[Christopher Joyce]

This is poetic mush at its best, in my opinion. Fantastically written and straight from the heart; what else could one ask for? Good work, my friend.

[Robert Clapp]

and to this i say: aw.

[Gandré]

this is a beautiful poem and it lifted my day. every stanza works perfectly. It is so wonderful to sense people in love. Mysterious skies in far away lands.. she must be a girl with a secret. Well done, genuinely soothing, this is true nature of man...living in harmony.

[Staci Brown]

wow, very tender and sweet words and teh emotions/feelings behind them for your princess :D

well done hon

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[Kenneth Miles]

Oh, dear, oh dear, I've stumbled upon a love poem. This was terrific. This gives me hope. This makes me believe true love does exist.

[He@ther!]

Wow!!!:) such an awesome piece!!!:) Extremely romantic:) this type of stuff is what i enjoy reading the most:) Awesome job!!!!!:)

[Last Lying Look]

It's beautiful! You two are so lucky to have eachother. :D

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

AWW BABY I LOVE IT!!!!! :-D YOU WRITE ME SUCH AMAZING POETRY!!