Lost

Just something. Inspired by Cirque du Soleil's song Hijo de la Luna

I fall slowly,

Drifting in dancing words

On an endless flow

Of tranquility and peace.

Light fast notes

Slip from the world

Striking gently

Gracing unworthy me.

Such beauty is here,

Amazing love and life.

I fall, I float.

Up I fall,

So very high.

Toes touch down

On the moon,

Hands in hers.

We dance together,

Swirling and twirling,

Lost in it all.

Lost in our souls.

Lost in our love.

Author's Note

It is what it is.

Reviews

[Enigma]

It is what it is...SIMPLY AMAZING!!
"just something?"....Just something so perfect!!
I loved it. From the word choice to it's rhythm and the smotth flow. It felt so good simply to read this. This can be turned into a very sweet song.
I love the last three lines very much...
Very well-written....^_^
GREAT WRITE!!

[FoolsGold23]

Ahhh, dancing on the face of the moon, so I'm not the only one ;) . There is no way to "simply" state the elegance of this work, such anomalies that fit it perfectly "Up I fall" and the like. Wow, this had me grinning in suprise and happiness. Great job!!

[ShAdOw]

:)

wow , what it is is AAAAMAYZIINNGGG

[The Mad Prophet]

Very well done, I like how you describe how you feel m music and possably interpretaiting dances. Very well writen as it is though. Great job.

[Tai Chi Italy]

hehehe lost in eachother is the only place you float up for sure!lol A very pleasing read John....Yes it is what it is, smiling at you, Tai