unnoticed

I swirl, twirl, whirl,

Wafting along the crowded streets.

A being of no substance,

I pass on unnoticed.

No acknowlegdement,

No name.

No personality,

But it's how I like it.

A nobody

In entirety,

I wander completely

For my part of eternity.

 

 

alone.

 

 

But that's how I like it.

 

 

invisible.

 

 

Yes, that's me.
Insignificant in the world,

Unable to change its course.

A soft whisper,

The passing of the breeze,

And I pass away

From this existance,

From this world,

From this life.

 

 

unnoticed.

 

 

 

Reviews

[ShAdOw]

well you cant be insignificant

cuz you are significant to courtney :)

[DevilsNeedLove2]

I cannot tell you how much I relate to this.

Absolutely GORGEOUS writing. I love it!

[allwrite]

Oh, John, I love this one. Don't we all feel insignificant and unnoticed, at times? Only, we always leave a mark on someone. We may not know it, but they do.

You are of substance. Your writing is proof of that.
AW

[Larissa G.]

If we notice you and your work, then aren't you noticed?
Oh, fun. :)
I enjoyed reading it, truly, it flowed very well and overall came together.

[darkgurl]

I like this, this is very well put together, very well written.

[lady o]

Rich in wording, and I love the set up of the poem, it flows well and looks well. You will be noticed with your writing that is for sure. Excellent piece that I so enjoyed ~~ would love to read your work again. It is very good and you have a talent!

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

I notice you!! you are my somebody... baby ..