Fly Now

This song is the love child of me and my boredom at the airport! :P

 

Well I’ve got to go,

Home is calling to me.

But my time with you

Passed so easily.

I hate to leave now

Without you at my side

Just remember it isn’t goodbye.

 

It’s time for me to fly now

Time to get on that plane

And let it take me away.

Up above the rest of the world

I’ll be thinking of you

And the way you make me whole.

 

Farther than we were

And closer all the same,

I’ll be with you there

Shortly again.

Don’t miss me too much,

I’ll be back at your side.

For now I’ll be up in the sky.

 

It’s time for me to fly now

Time to get on that plane

And let it take me away.

Up above the rest of the world

I’ll be thinking of you

And the way you make me whole.

Author's Note

I've written better but it ain't my worst haha. Criticize and bash away, good people!

Reviews

[ShAdOw]

YOU HAVE A LOVE CHILD WITH AN AIRPORT!!! IS THAT LEGAL?

amazing poem lol

[LostCauze[:P]]

pretty good poem, may not be your best but its pretty good. I thought it was a sweet poem. Keep writing.

[Larissa G.]

Aw. Well, while not the best poem ever, it sounds like a sweet little song, truthfully. Very touching. :)

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

Well I think everyoe is crazy because I loved it... ( then again Im a little biased [sp]) It was very cute and I thought it was sweet.

[allwrite]

Not your best, but I still like it.
Bon Voyage!!

[Ambassidor in Chains]

Well, as you said, it isn't your best Johnny! But it isn't bad, it's just a bit mellow-dramatic. I'd suggest making seem a bit happier. But either way, I didn't hate it. Have a good time on your trip.

[Caitlin Nicole]

Aw this is really sweet. I really like it =]
The only thing I could criticize is the flow. It was overall good, but if you just put a little more time into it, this poem could be very good.

[Jessica Benfield]

wow, this is nice! i like the feeling of flying away, yet without your loved one by your side to comfort you along the way. the way this makes the reader feel... well, to say the least - it was certainly a great thing coming from boredom at an airport! great job!
smiles,
jess