Adrenalin Rush

WOO!! that felt good!

 

POWER

                        It fills my veins

 Gives me life

 

                             And swallows my soul…

 

 

                                                flaming blood

POUNDS

Through my head.

                                    I enjoy

 The furious rush

           An injection of adrenalin

      

 

            Like a bullet to the brain.

                              Kill?

No.

 

 

                                    Relax.

 

relish          this sweet        sensation…

 

……………

 

……I’m still here?

GUESS i retained command

                       

                        Of the demonic rage

            

 

     Adrenalin                             pushing                through

 

                                    My       mind

Author's Note

Anyone confused on my thought process yet? lol

Reviews

[Ember]

The text certainly reflects how it is when you're having an adrenaline rush. I read it quite easily, and thought it well written.. First of it's kind that I've come across. Good job~

[TamerQtaish]

Beautiful indeed!
It kinda mixed me up at first as in the way you wrote it, different fonts and colors, but honestly I loved it!
I solute you this is truly unique
Great writing, bravo...

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

This sounds like a man in orgasmic delight to me John!lol Yes that sort of Adrenalin buzz is almost as good as top writer poll and getting published, I can't decide which is the highest high right now....memory isn't what it used to be!lol I do like the sensational layout and the POWER RED of the first word gives enormous impact from the start....just like sex huh? Just teasing....LLB

[James Carter]

This was great, man. I liked how you decided to write it...very creative, indeed...

[An Ordinary Woman]

Ohhhh! This is too cool, too creative and I love it! Creativity is such a awesome thing and when ya got it, ya got it, you definitely got it! This is like you have creativity bursting at your seams. I hope you never stop enjoying words and everything you can do with them. It makes me want to go play too...

This is fantastic!

[Marie]

Nice.

[Shadows of Sight]

I See what you mean about that music now! Wow! I bet it's alot like jumping into a freezing cold river, just for the fun of it! lol :)
Great and colorful write!