I like it. : ) My boss is in a band and can't write like that!! lol I have a different view of what Satan represents, but I wouldn't challenge your view in ANY way. I got to meet Anton before he died, and his daughters, and even borrowed on time to write and protest to Congress to get Satanism to be a religion in jail like it does now. That last stanza you wrote sold the whole poem to me. The "intro" was like that of a song, where you hear different parts come together in waves, and then you hear the obvious beat that, in sharp bursts, start the song with that last stanza!! -Mark
I love this poem. It reminds me of the book called the Book Thief actually. I enjoyed reading it. I am not a satanist and never will be, but you know seeing a lot of things in this life is hard. The devil makes sure that good people are destroying themselves and you know everything you said in this poem. Thank you for sharing, Daddy Goku.
yes very well put. again i love your style. the way you flow. i knew someone who was a former satanist, very lost, thought it gave him power. its sick, although i won't judge other people but the fact i know evil exists. thankyou for the write:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
And thank you for the write. I ain't a satanist though haha, far from it. Was a simple acknowledgeme.. read moreAnd thank you for the write. I ain't a satanist though haha, far from it. Was a simple acknowledgement of my own base evil within is all.
11 Years Ago
your welcome. nahh i didn't mean i thought you were a satanist . i understand, i tend to use the ter.. read moreyour welcome. nahh i didn't mean i thought you were a satanist . i understand, i tend to use the term satan in conjunction with just meaning evil frequently. but again well written i look forward to reading more of your work
I like it. : ) My boss is in a band and can't write like that!! lol I have a different view of what Satan represents, but I wouldn't challenge your view in ANY way. I got to meet Anton before he died, and his daughters, and even borrowed on time to write and protest to Congress to get Satanism to be a religion in jail like it does now. That last stanza you wrote sold the whole poem to me. The "intro" was like that of a song, where you hear different parts come together in waves, and then you hear the obvious beat that, in sharp bursts, start the song with that last stanza!! -Mark
Eesh, let's hope Satan's crack legal team doesn't get wind of this ;-) You do know he owns every lawyer in the world, yes? So...pretty ballsy move, posting this.
;-)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
He can go ahead and bring 'em on, I've dealt with the like before and the proper response to the a**.. read moreHe can go ahead and bring 'em on, I've dealt with the like before and the proper response to the a******s is to bitchslap them and send 'em on their way.
12 Years Ago
Pretty sure you need to put them on retainer for that ;-)
Cook, writer, reader, musician. I don't bte, unless asked to or bitten first.
My site's link is to some recordings of my poetry, and I might add some recordings of me playing my sax onto there too... more..