Perfectly Beautiful

Perfectly Beautiful

A Poem by L.A.

He's perfect, perfect, perfectly beautiful
And I'm just a stupid lovestruck little girl
tryin' to give him the world

But his heart will never belong to me
he's got another possibility
He's not gonna give up until she's his

Oh, if only she could see
how lucky she really has to be
to claim him for her one and only

He's just so perfect, perfect, perfectly beautiful
with hands I'll never be able to hold
and a shoulder I can't lean on when the moon is full

As I stood and watched from afar
they made their way into each others' hearts
Not realizing how I would fall apart

No one seemed to see what was wrong
or how I'd loved him for so long
What will he do to himself once she's gone?

But they're perfect, perfect, perfect for each other
I should've known that they'd end up together
After all they've been through

My heart aches for him with all I have
and now I don't even know where we stand

But there's one thing I know for sure:


I.
Can't.
Stop.
Falling.
In.
Love.
With.
Him.

© 2010 L.A.


Author's Note

L.A.
This is just a bunch of scattered ideas squished together into a poem about how I'm feeling at the moment.

The picture has a hidden meaning, which I'm sure only Sarah will interpret.

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Generally, this is exactly how I am feeling right now. 0_o It's so awesome. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


so many people can relate to this, I like it. good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome. Great. Trade he with her and girl with guy and I relate to it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I almost know where you're coming from on this. The only thing is, you're a girl and i'm not. I totally am in love with this poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I kinda get the picture, but ya, I liked it! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha, I get the picture.

But wow, this is 10x better than mine ever was. Completely superior.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 3, 2010
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