Hopeful

Every word you say,

I treasure it in my heart.

Each time I hear your voice,

I get warmed inside.

Whenever you happen to glance at me,

I feel as light as a feather.

Being beside you

makes me feel so free.

Do you feel the same about me?

Reviews

[OR]

I'm sure he feels the same about you, at least he will after reading this
Short, simple but yet powerful
Good Job
Peace!

[.]

...This is such a emotional write, I can feel the sincereity in this. Your feelings are well stated...

[AllyKinzz:)]

Emotions, very HOPEFUL like said in the title. :D

[Onatah]

I like it!! You have emptied your heart into someone and you are hoping they love you back. I know how you feel. God gives us relationships so we can practice this method. He wants us to empty our hearts, and then hope. Hope is a form of practicing faith.

[Veronica]

:) This warms my heart,laura.

[nostal]

Rhymes nice.
Also very real.
Good job.