MarkA Story by L.A.My attempt to retell St. Mark's Gospel in 600-800 words for an assignment.I. The long-promised and blessed Messiah is near; His servant John prepares the way. Jews and Gentiles, lend your ear. Crowds flock to be baptized by the wilderness seer, who sees that the LORD is not far away. The long-promised and blessed Messiah is near. Restoration of a nation always held dear and forgiveness for those who repent and obey. Jews and Gentiles, lend your ear. Bend your knee, bow your head, and revere the One whom the LORD sends that day. The long-promised and blessed Messiah is near. Above the Jordan, the cluttered skies clear for God’s Son, baptized in water and golden ray. Jews and Gentiles, lend your ear. The LORD’s glory and hope for the nations is here. Take heart--at last, there is no more delay for the long-promised Messiah to appear. O people of God, to Jesus lend your ear. II. Jesus cures and forgives the afflicted, each move and miracle a messenger of mastery. All of creation is clay in his hands. With calloused carpenter’s hands, he heals them: blind and beggar, lame and leper. Jesus cures and forgives the afflicted. Resources abound at his will while the eyes of their recipients remain veiled. Each move and miracle a messenger of mastery: the stormy sea settles; he walks upon it-- demons discern and flee from his divinity. All of creation is clay in his hands. III. In the middle of the hills and dirt of Caesarea Philippi, he turns to his disciples and asks who he is. They’ve been walking through the villages all day and now sharp rocks are digging between their toes from under their sandals, and it’s hot. Silence at first--then small stones rustling as the men shift uncomfortably. “You’re the Messiah,” Peter finally says. “The long-expected King.” He can almost taste the sand in his teeth. But he clenches his jaw; he knows that Jesus isn’t just another prophet. Now the others know it too. Jesus replies, “Don’t reveal this to anyone.” And he stands there, quiet for a few minutes, and they wait, reveling in the prophecies they’ve known since before they can remember. Their teacher then explains how he must suffer persecution and rejection at the hands of their leaders, how he must die and rise again. The words weigh down on Peter like the heat of the ever-climbing sun. “No!” he says, and his teacher rebukes him. “This is God’s purpose.” IV. Awestruck eyes are turned to him, to his glory; eager ears gather up his wisdom; faithful mouths deny his future suffering. Blinding light, and there they stand trefoil in blinding white--Moses, Elijah, Jesus. Awestruck eyes are turned to him, to his glory. Towards Jerusalem he heads, healing and teaching the Kingdom to those whose eager ears gather up his wisdom-- prophesying perfidy, persecution, then passing--resurrection three days after. Faithful mouths deny his future suffering. V. hosanna! hosanna! joyful cries as he enters atop a colt that cloaked beast of burden… palm branches and blessings placed at his feet prophecies of end times. passover the wide room upstairs, long table thanks given for bread, wine body, blood betrayal from a partaker kneeling to pray, head bowed “what You will.” found by judas in the garden a kiss and he’s gone to the chief priests confessing he’s the Messiah crucify him!--some king, with those thorns twisted in his hair and the spit of the crowd in his face whipped and mocked and struck and slandered and snubbed and the rusty nails dive through his flesh through blood and grime and sweat and wine and the earth groans as the curtain’s torn and he cries to heaven----Silence. body wrapped in linen large stone rolled over the tomb, then darkness swallowed by light on the third day. rise. the long-promised Messiah was here. © 2015 L.A.Author's Note
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Added on November 6, 2015 Last Updated on November 6, 2015 Tags: st. mark, gospel, retelling, biblical history and literature AuthorL.A.ILAboutHopefully a better person than I used to be. I don't write nearly as often as I should, but I'll try to post when I can. UPDATE: A lot of this writing is now outdated. Proceed at your own risk.. more..Writing
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