Vampire

 

I pinch my skin

just killing time

while fateful feet

begin to creep

and then he's there 

hands in my hair

and arms around

my every move

my heartbeat stops

but starts too soon

chilled to the bone

I spin around

look in his eyes

and find myself

lost forever

eternal bliss

with a lover

and a violent kiss

Author's Note

Ignore spelling errors or grammatical problems. Comment. Or don't. Won't hurt my feelings either way.

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

wow this is beautiful, vampires, i love 'em... great write

[there is no more from m..]

wow what a grate poem
I'm a fan of vampires as well
but not the twilight vamps
but i liked this poem
well done

[Bachman]

As a vampire fan I can say I liked this very much so. Good work hon.

[revenant21]

I realllyyyy Like this one, Holly. It had such great flow. Great work.

[Tori]

Omgz Holleyz. This is awesome!! Great flow! And You sound less self concious!!! GO HOLLY!! Butno...it is a great poem. I love the last few lines talking about the violent kiss!! Well, I loved it all, but you get what I'm saying!!!