broken..

The feeling that made me love you forever.

Is no longer there,

like u ever cared.

 

The feeling inside me feels broken to pieces.

The feeling that shattered,

But to you, never mattered.

 

The feeling inside me thats completely empty.

The feeling i needed,

But you never succeeded

 

The feeling inside me strikes me like lightning.

It strikes me so deeply,

damaged completely.

 

Author's Note

ok, once again please excuse grammar. i hope u like it cuz personally its one of my favorites. let me know what you think. i will comment your writing back. thank you!

Reviews

[Wildecat]

This is a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.