The Price

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The Price

Take no comfort in the calm,

you have not won.

Your chronic sickness will be your demise,

your lungs will fill

with the putrid black puss of hate

that will drain your life away.

Asphyxiate you b*****d

for you have raped

and tortured the innocent,

now you must pay the price!

An eye for an eye,

a dream for a dream.

Your dreams of power

for my dreams of love and liberty.

I have my brothers and sisters,

Angels of God,

by my side.

The war we waged

was so very just

and yet so many perished

as we purged this Earth

of your chaos and darkness.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Asphyxiate you b*****d

for you have raped

and tortured the innocent,

now you must pay the price!

AMEN!

[Archangel Gabriel]

Totally! Thank you TLB

[Keith]

You paint some gruesome images. I dare rr your work before bed time.

[Archangel Gabriel]

Be afraid.....be very afraid! Thanks Keith but they are the mere rants of my dark side!

[SteveB]

"An eye for an eye, a dream for a dream". A lovely line well phrased. Surrounded by so much anger.

The emotion pours through as does the honesty so the write was effective in that way. Viewed strictly as a poem there were a few nice lines and the idea of choking on your hate began well.

[Archangel Gabriel]

Thank you Steve. Thankfully fictional anger even if spurred on by true events. Merely words to express emotion.

[Leslie Philibert]

I very rarely write negative reviews, but I`m sorry, this is too brutal and aggressive for me...

[Archangel Gabriel]

I understand your gentle nature Leslie, but at times the behaviour of others demands robust responses.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow Gab, another dark and powerful write!

[Archangel Gabriel]

Thank you John