Rattle Snake

Rattle Snake

Coiled beneath a rock

under a stool in the cool

café

a slimy snake slithered,

shedding its skin on the way.

As it sought out its victims,

pure innocent flesh,

it struck with such venom

and killed in a flash!

Reviews

[gabrielle]

Very crisp description on how human could be so treacherous. Nicely penned.

[Archangel Gabriel]

Very trecherous! Thank you Gabriele.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha! I can relate to this piece as there is at least one snake in this cafe who gains sympathy from the customers when he is trodden on for sinking his poisonous fangs in friends. Nice write

[Archangel Gabriel]

Yes I am sure there are some gullible but well meaning people who may be taken in by such tactics. Thanks for the review my friend, I will stop by your page in return as soon as I can.

[Cassie]

How I hate snakes...this poem bring me scary shivers...

[Archangel Gabriel]

Ha! thanks Cassie poetry is meant to provoke emotion. I think we humand have an inate fear of snakes as a survival mechanism.

[Rahul]

Wow, you're a scientist...lol:), why don't you try to go on discovery channel..lol :) *laugh*
that's an amazing write, you told me by this what i didn't know...liked this piece, i always love to read such kinda writes from where i got something new...100/100

[Archangel Gabriel]

Many thanks FLW