Angel or Demon?

Angel or Demon?

Black or white,

moral or immoral,

dark or light

where does your heart lie?

Are you on the side of good

or does evil float your boat?

Do you wear a witch’s hat,

ride a birch broom

or are you simply so evil

Lucifer himself

has cast you from his lair?

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Does evil float your boat. That made me giggle a little - but this is a serious poem There are times when I run across someone and I wonder this same thing - only I don't say it this eloquently.

[Archangel Gabriel]

You are very kind TLB

[Keith]

I find this rather tongue in cheek, your someone may not be that bad at all, hard to decide. Good luck with that dilemma.

[Archangel Gabriel]

No I think him evil but he himself cannot see it. Thanks Keith

[Dana Alsamsam]

i like the darkness of this a lot! i think you could go deeper though- the images you use are very broad. feel free to get a little weird and more creative with your metaphor. for example, good and evil don't always have to be portrayed as black and white...switch it up! take chances! it felt very safe, but i did enjoy this and think you're definitely on the right track:)

[Archangel Gabriel]

Thank you Dana. I will look in more depth at the subject.

[Emily B]

i was hoping that you were my old friend, Gabe . . . haven't seen him around the café for ages

[Archangel Gabriel]

Sorry Emily not the same I am afraid. Sorry to disappoint.

[Emily B]

happy memories of conversations with him could transfer to you :)

welcome to the cafe

[Archangel Gabriel]

Many thanks And conversation is good my lady.