THIS IS THE END

I lay at the rooftop of my house

Starring at the stars starring at the moon

Simply thinking of how time robs

Robs man of great things ending

Robs man of great conversations

Robs man of happiness

Robs man of being happy with the one woman he loves

Robs man of perfect moments

Robs man of accomplishing greatness

Robs man of youth

Time ruined the world

This is the truth being told

Time does not bring anything good with it

It tells us we are born and at some point we will die

Time controls and enslaves man

Time you sneaky little f**k

Time i hate your f*****g guts

Time, its time to put an end to you

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Sometimes I wish we could put an end to it. Mother Nature is always beautiful; Father Time is a merciless b*****d

[Maggie]

Sentencing time to it's own death, very clever. (:

[Emrick]

mhh man.putting an end to time means death.
nice poem.th

[No name]

I love this piece

[EMMIE]

HA HA THOSE LAST LINES ARE COOL, THEY SHOW PERSONALITY. SO MUCH TRUTH IN THIS POEM. GOOD WORK.

[goldenblack]

this is beautifully done. to be honest i wasn't really feeling it until i read "time you sneaky little f**k, time i hate your f*****g guts" i feel like this took the poem from being another broad statement to your voice actually speaking. it reminded me of a jim morrison poem. well done

[Joiedevivre]

raw anger, always like to see this, strong spirit. Initially while reading this I was thinking of the good and even great things that time can bring like wisdom, maturity calm.
But by the end, I have to say i was convinced and with you against the f****r united!

[Katie]

I love this! I wish we could just freeze time for awhile. Everything happens to quick and it is hard to appreciate it all sometimes. Great job!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

Time seems to rip apart alot of great things we have in life......i feel this poem so deeply inside.... i was ripped from alot of things in life due to time