JUST FEELINGS

I used to find it so easy to give my heart away

Unaware of the price i would have to pay

I found out the hard way that love is no friend of mine

Cause all it does is hurt me every single time

An angel i had fallen for

Then i find out she wants to be a w***e

Sadness this brings to my soul 

Knowing im destined to be alone

This angel had all the intangibles to be something special

A sensitive heart, talented, creative and down right beautiful

She probably didnt see it, but i saw potential

I guess i didnt matter to her at all

I guess i was just another stranger

Yet, i will not close my heart to the world

I will love again, but not just one person

And to those that find this to be a dubious claim 

I will prove them wrong i will show them all 

That my fist maybe small, but but my heart is giagantic 

And all i want to do is show it

Lets put it this way so you'll understand

The  reason why i live is because i have so much love to give

Nothing more nor nothing less simply love and thats it

Reviews

[goldenblack]

my only critizism is that you start out by rhyming and then stop halfway through, which makes me wonder if that was intentional or not. I think if you were trying to make a statement, which is how i read it, that once you bring the idea of being "alone" you stop the rhyming scheme which is a powerful idea that i have used in some poetry as well. I wonder if you could make this stronger (if it was intentional if not then i feel stupid haha) anyway you are a talented writer and im enjoying reading your stuff

[Ace Of Hearts]

Great! Sweet. We all love to love. And sometimes it hurts.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I really like this poem you wrote. It has a nice, but passionate flux to it.
"That my fist maybe small, but but my heart is giagantic"; a very creative line, to add to your ending

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I liked this a lot it was if I could see the heart on your sleeve