Strung Out

Inspired by Frank Sinotra & Louis Armstrong Actually thinking it can Be a possible song

I'm spining out of control what 

Will happen next I don't know 

I drink away my pain but 

The feelings just the same 

Even when its all gone 

Time is heading down the drain 

Just like my money and my fame 

What will I do, 

What will I do, 

When your not by my side 

When your no longer in my life 

Tell me what will I do Without you? 

I'm at a standstil with 

No fight or a will 

How will I survive 

Who will I turn to, for 

A sign, cause my mind Is spining, 

spining all the time 

From when I awaken 

To the wee hours of the night 

When I turn off all the lights 

Cause my mind is spining 

I'm spining out of control 

Simply wanting to know 

Will you be by my side? 

Will you be in my life? 

Will you be my wife? 

Or will I be drowning out my sorrows 

Until tomorrow 

Cause I'm spining 

Yes I'm spining 

Oh I'm spining

Reviews

[Stef Outsiders]

So Full of emotion, some of us feel like this, can relate to it easily... love the flow of your poem, it molds together really well... excellent piece!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Drinking is not gonna cure those ills. The emotion is clear. Well written.

[qaralynn]

oehh nice..I like it!

[stellasautelle]

well written.. flows nicely :)