FOREVER

I'll love you till my words unravel 

I'll love you till the clocks unwind 

Till eternity is calling last orders 

On that place on the outskirts of time

I'll love you till tin turns to silver 

I'll love you till air turns into gold 

Till every last rhyme has been written 

And even when the new moon is old. 

I'll love you till death has no meaning 

I'll love you till life is a dream 

Until the river climbs up the mountain 

Till the bells of goodbye never ring

I'll love you till the last star has fallen 

I'll love you till the music dies 

Till my last breath has been taken 

And even when your memory of me disappears

Reviews

[Shy_muse]

Oh my goodness. This. Is. Amazing. I love the passion and story that this poem tells. It's so fanciful yet raw and beautiful. I love the affirmation of love that this poem give to the lover. Great work!! I will definitely be reading more. 100/100!! < 3

[shinybluestars03]

I loved this poem.
The flow and rhyme is great.
I can feel all your emotions and that you truly love this person.
Great job Jonathan, keep on writing
and thanks for sharing.

Best wishes

[Jack Reaper]

this is a beautiful testament to the one you love. very well done. a love like this is hard to find and hard to truly allow yourself to feel. exceptional work.