Of the Mar

I took different phrases that popped into my head, made them rhyme and wrote them down. It has no meaning and it's not really supposed to make sense it was just fun.

Of the Mar

 

 

 

 

From what we are to who we’ve been

It all goes back to before we begin

It’s hard to see but plain to feel

Like shaking hands on an uncertain deal

The world around us is plain to see

But if we don’t open our eyes we won’t feel free

Like riding on the winds of change

We circle the thoughts of our whole range

The frosted peaks of our minds eye

Can only melt if we can see through the lie

I am what I am

We are what we are

The house has come to take us far

We see the long chain of desuetude thoughts in the darkness 

Of the mar

No sense can be made of what’s said

But the point of it is

Is what at least you have read.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems

Reviews

[Flo_writer]

I know you said to ignore the grammar probs. and for the most part I will, but I thought you should know that you put the word "plan" instead of "plain." Other than that I enjoyed it. I love rhyme's and this was like a refreshing breath of creativity for me.

Favorite lines:
The frosted peaks of our minds eye
Can only melt if we can see through the lie.

I found the whole poem unique and one to show of talent, kudos!

[Ian]

In some ways you're right and in others you're wrong. This has meaning in some ways yet is so random that it you could say it had meaning. Great poem.

[Samuel Dickens]

This would make a good song. Song lyrics often make no sense but need only good rythm. Actually, this isn't totally non-sensical, though.

[Moonflower]

i loved the lyrical nature of this :)

[dfz]

great rhyme, great poem

[Madame Quill]

Another good read. Nice flow, rhythm and rhyme. Well done.