Freefall/Letting Go

Freefall/Letting Go

A Poem by Alicia_Skye
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Again not too sure on the title, or wording for that matter. I'll probably go over it and change it all. But here's the raw/first version.

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FREEFALL/LETTING GO

"Don't think about it,
Don't analyze it,
Or weigh the pros and cons.
Let go, go with your intuition
Let yourself be lost in the moment."

Easy for you to say, easy for some to do

Hard for someone who keeps everything locked inside
Who thinks about the possibilities before acting
Fear of hurting someone close
Envying the ones who can, just let go.

I can't,
I wouldn't know how
I can dream about breaking free,
Free falling and getting lost
It's a nice dream
It's what I want
I want it more than anything
But I'll need your help

So come on, make me feel.

© 2010 Alicia_Skye


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The only way ta learn how ta fly, is to jump.
Be not afraid of what other think or feel, they are not under your control. Be who you are and who you feel you were meant to be. Without freedom we cannot evovle into the women were are meant to be. Be not afraid. For there is nothing to fear, but fear itself.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Thankyou Dawn! Very insightful and deep response, I like it. Basically telling me to jump, take the risk. Like you said, the only way to learn how to fly, is to jump.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The only way ta learn how ta fly, is to jump.
Be not afraid of what other think or feel, they are not under your control. Be who you are and who you feel you were meant to be. Without freedom we cannot evovle into the women were are meant to be. Be not afraid. For there is nothing to fear, but fear itself.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sydney, NSW, Australia



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